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BJF / Blowtober - FIC: Top Ten (SGA)

If BJF and Blowtober don't mean anything to you, you probably want to skip this one...



Title: Top 10
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: John/Rodney
Wordcount: ~1280
Author's note: This was written for Blowtober, but I would like to (conveniently) dedicate it to neevebrody and wish her a very happy birthday!


It wasn't like cock sucking was his favorite thing to do in the world - not even close, actually. Rodney was rather fastidious about bodily hygiene, and he wouldn't go down on John unless he'd taken a shower first. It was something that drove John a little nuts, especially when he was swept up in the moment. For the most part, Rodney really didn't care; he wasn't letting John stick his cock in his mouth without washing first, no matter how hot (and hot and bothered) he was.

And, of course, his jaw got sore quickly. John's cock was big, and it was hard to suck him all in without teeth catching on sensitive bits or triggering his gag reflex - often both.

There were a lot of other things they could do - things he really enjoyed, things that made John come, and come hard. All things being equal, Rodney could go quite happily without sucking John's cock for the rest of his life.

The problem was... all things were not equal.

When they'd first started doing this thing, Rodney had been all over John, sucking, licking, kissing, exploring - it had been less about figuring out what John liked than about feeding his appetite to touch!claim!own! It had, however, resulted in discovering a number of things John liked, and he'd come up with his own Sheppard's Top 5 list.

For example, John enjoyed having his nipples played with -

...John shuddered beneath him as Rodney tongued the stiff nub of flesh.

"Fuck!" he whispered, arching into Rodney's mouth.

"You like that, huh?" Rodney asked, smirking down as he drew a fingernail across the damp nipple.

"Oh yeah," John replied, then gasped as Rodney's teeth gently latched onto the other one.


An odd one that Rodney had discovered completely by accident - John really liked it when Rodney licked the inside of his arm.

"Jesus, fuck!"

Rodney had started with a simple kiss on the palm of John's hand, lips grazing his wrist, and was surprised by the explosive reaction it elicited. Intrigued at how the simple caress made John squirm and thrash beneath him, Rodney rolled him onto his back and lay across him, pinning him in place.

Grasping his arm firmly, Rodney used his mouth to map a meandering trail of little licks, nips and kisses over the delicate skin until he reached the crook of John's arm. He focused all of his attention on that tender crease, alternately dragging the tip of his tongue along it and then blowing across the damp skin.

John groaned and shook and Rodney took a moment to kiss him sweetly before rearranging himself, to repeat the process on his other arm.


John loved to leave marks. It really turned him on to be able to leave bruises -

John nuzzled in behind Rodney's ear, making him shiver as he nibbled and licked at the skin of his neck. His arm was wrapped around Rodney's stomach, holding him firmly in place.

There were a collection of minor bruises on his shoulder and torso from a quick escape/run/tumble down the side of a hill earlier in the week. John's mouth moved to a small patch of unmarred pink between the contusions, and carefully worried the piece of skin between his teeth. Rodney hissed but held still as the sharp sting was followed by a soothing lick, repeated again and again as John placed a network of marks among the ones that were already there.

Rodney could feel John's erection, hard and hot, against the small of his back, and he moaned. "Fuck, John! Just fuck me already!"

"Soon, Rodney, soon," John promised as he lowered his mouth to Rodney's skin once more.


And wow, John went off like a rocket if Rodney bit him on the back of the neck while they were fucking-

He thrust forward, John's hips snapping back to meet him, and he was close, so fucking close!

"God, John," he moaned, one hand grasping John's hip, the other wrapped around him, fingers curled up over his shoulder. Rodney's hand tightened, pulling John against him as he settled on his heels, dragging John to sit on his lap, driving Rodney's cock in deeper.

"Oh, oh, Jesus, Rodney-" John gasped out, head falling back against Rodney's shoulder. Rodney licked the shell of his ear, kissed his neck, then bit down hard as his orgasm slammed into him like a freight train. He felt John's body seize and convulse around him, felt warm sticky wetness splatter across John's chest and his arm, and realized that he'd made John come without touching his dick, and he was so going to do that every fucking time he could for the rest of his life -


But of all the things that John liked, of all the things he did that got John off, John really loved it when Rodney blew him.

"Jesus, Rodney," John croaked out, eyes slitted as he watched his cock slide in across Rodney's lips. "You're like the best porn when you do that, oh fuck, yeah!"

Rodney didn't feel like the best porn. His jaw was sore. His knees were sore. The angle wasn't horrible, but it wasn't great. But John was looking at him like he was the hottest thing he'd ever seen. John was licking his lips, and panting, and mumbling shit like, "so fucking sexy" and "porn star mouth" and "want you like this all night" and Jesus, if it wasn't the biggest fucking power trip to see John so out of control, he didn't know what was. It was like he was on drugs, because John, Colonel Taciturn himself, just couldn't seem to shut up, praises for Rodney's sexy mouth mixed in with dirty talk and random moans, and damn it! He might be crippled tomorrow if he didn't get off his knees soon, but it was so worth it.

John reached out with a shaky hand, sliding his fingers into Rodney's hair to grasp it firmly before his hips started to thrust, Rodney's sure fire warning of impending orgasm. He tightened his grip on John's thighs and tried to relax his tense jaw.

"Fuck!" John's hips stuttered and then Rodney was swallowing around him, putting up with the taste because, Jesus, the noises John was making were incredible! And then John was pulling him up on the bed beside him, kissing him deep, tasting himself in Rodney's mouth, and if Rodney hadn't already been hard enough to pound nails, that would have done it right there, because fuck. John was sucking on his tongue and it was filthy, scorching hot.

John pulled back from, sucked on Rodney's bottom lip for a moment, then released it. "Gonna suck you now," he said, a little glassy eyed, a little breathy, and Rodney felt him, warm and solid against his belly - holy shit!

"You're half hard again already!" he accused, half annoyed, half impressed.

John grinned at him as he shimmied down between his legs. He peeled Rodney's pants off, mouthing him through his boxers before pushing those down as well, and Rodney decided that it was possible he'd have to re-evaluate. While sucking cock wouldn't really ever be something he enjoyed, making John lose his mind was. If he split the difference - it might not make his personal top five, but maybe his top ten...

"Oh, god," he gasped as John shouldered between his thighs, grasping leg behind the knee and pushing up and open. Top ten for sure was his last lucid thought before his ability to think went abruptly offline as a hot, wet inferno enveloped his cock.

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syble4
Oct. 23rd, 2010 03:26 am (UTC)
Oh my God that was Hoottt. I'm so glad neevebrody had a birthday. :)
shaddyr
Oct. 24th, 2010 04:16 am (UTC)
Thank you kindly!
em_kellesvig
Oct. 23rd, 2010 04:09 am (UTC)
Holy Mother of Guh! I love the format of this story and the pacing is excellent. Very sexy, and the characters come across so well. That's kind of beside the point because I'm really shallow and this is hot like a burning hot thing! Whew! neevebrody needs to have birthdays more often, like maybe four or five times a year if this is the result. Yowza!
shaddyr
Oct. 24th, 2010 04:34 am (UTC)
Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad to know the flashback format worked for you.

Glad you liked it!
slashjunkie1
Oct. 23rd, 2010 04:49 am (UTC)
The things we do for love.
yarnaddict
Oct. 23rd, 2010 05:22 am (UTC)
Uh.

Sorry, uh... I was just... I... pardon me. I'll, uh, have to... you know. Leave a more coherent response later. After... um. After my brain reboots.

GUH!
shaddyr
Oct. 24th, 2010 04:35 am (UTC)
HEE! I don't think I ever sent someone's brain off-line before. *grin*

Glad you enjoyed!
squidgiepdx
Oct. 23rd, 2010 05:55 am (UTC)
Umm... *thunk*

Wow! What a wonderful, hawt thing to read while laying in bed. And me with 280 pounds of our two dogs between me and me hubby. Gak!!!
shaddyr
Oct. 24th, 2010 04:36 am (UTC)
Well, I hope the pups weren't in the way of you and the hubby and any frisky business you might have wanted to be up to...

I am happy you enjoyed!
almostnever
Oct. 23rd, 2010 06:40 am (UTC)
Nicely framed and yummy porn-- just the right kind of fic for a Friday!
shaddyr
Oct. 24th, 2010 04:37 am (UTC)
Thank you kindly!
sherry57
Oct. 23rd, 2010 07:57 am (UTC)
Oh my god, another scorching hot neevebrody birthday pressie I got to share. I don't think I've ever been so happy about someone else's birthday!!!
shaddyr
Oct. 24th, 2010 04:37 am (UTC)
Shared prezzies are the best kind, n'est-ce pas?

I'm happy you liked it!
sarcarmic
Oct. 23rd, 2010 12:44 pm (UTC)
Not really liking giving blowjobs because of the minor aches and pains it causes him - that's our Rodney alright! Nice bit of pwp for a lazy Saturday morning, thanks!
shaddyr
Oct. 24th, 2010 04:39 am (UTC)
Exactly! Rodney would do something for John if he knew that it was really important to him, even if it caused him some temporary discomfort.

Thanks for commenting!
sunnyd_lite
Oct. 23rd, 2010 12:56 pm (UTC)
If he split the difference - it might not make his personal top five, but maybe his top ten...
Love Rodney's analytical brain trying to deal with this, while John's giving him attention!

Fun way to start the morning!
shaddyr
Oct. 24th, 2010 04:41 am (UTC)
*grin* Rodney just can't stop thinking except when things are TILT TILT TILT because of OMG SHEPPARD MOUTH ON MY DICK NRGHHH. It's one of the things that I like so much about him.

Happy to help start your day right!
neevebrody
Oct. 23rd, 2010 02:00 pm (UTC)
Whoa! Seriously... where to start! God, this is so hot and so them and I love, love, love the format, giving the deadly hot glimpses of the Top 5 (Jesus, that Top 5!). I'm so glad Rodney is willing to split the difference, and I'm sure John is as well.

Thank you, darlin', for Blowtober and for me *greedily clutches smokin' hot fic, damn the 3rd degree burns*

I did mention hot, right?
shaddyr
Oct. 24th, 2010 04:47 am (UTC)
WHEE! I am delighted to know that you enjoyed it, since I have derived so much enjoyment from your SGA fic!

This is also the first BJF related fic I've ever actually finished, even though I've discussed concepts with outsideth3box a number of times. It usually gets as far as tossing snippets of ideas at her, and then I stall out, but this one almost wrote itself.

*hands you burn ointment*

Don't self immolate! I hope you had a happy birthday!
(no subject) - neevebrody - Oct. 27th, 2010 06:45 pm (UTC) - Expand
mdlbear
Oct. 23rd, 2010 02:11 pm (UTC)
*fans himself* They mean something now...
shaddyr
Oct. 24th, 2010 04:51 am (UTC)
DUDE! *blush* OMG! You *read this*???

Whoa. Uhm. Yeah. So, now you know I sometimes write gay porn. Uhm. Heh. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

So, I am TOTALLY going to blush like crzee OMG next time I see you and NO ONE ELSE will have a single clue as to exactly why...
(no subject) - mdlbear - Oct. 24th, 2010 05:16 am (UTC) - Expand
gyri
Oct. 23rd, 2010 02:11 pm (UTC)
Whoa!

This was so freakin' hot! Really love the way you wrote it.

And I love how Rodney loves to make John loose his mind.
shaddyr
Oct. 24th, 2010 04:53 am (UTC)
YES! I think that Rodney is a list maker. I think he likes to tick things off, with concise, little check marks. And right up at the top of his weekly list is, "reduce John to gibbering puddle by whatever means necessary".

Glad you enjoyed!
(no subject) - gyri - Oct. 24th, 2010 02:03 pm (UTC) - Expand
(no subject) - shaddyr - Oct. 24th, 2010 09:25 pm (UTC) - Expand
garfieldspet
Oct. 23rd, 2010 02:50 pm (UTC)
Um, My birthday is soon...Hint, hint, wink, wink.
shaddyr
Oct. 24th, 2010 04:54 am (UTC)
I guess you liked it then...

*giggles*

I'll have to keep that in mind!

fanarts_series
Oct. 23rd, 2010 02:55 pm (UTC)
GOsh ! excuses me a second i need to pick up my brain who melted on a puddle of goo on the floor and i'm going to comment...
Done !

With the only last cell in my empty brain i say "fraking sexy" i think i'm going to take a shower and fast lol !

Wonderful porn, thanks a lot.
shaddyr
Oct. 24th, 2010 04:56 am (UTC)
Hee! I hope you didn't lose any brain bits in the puddle of goo...

Glad that you enjoyed!
lazy_8s
Oct. 23rd, 2010 03:11 pm (UTC)

So very hot, but so real! I like how you show that not every sexual encounter is like porn, in which one does get tired or sore. This happens to all of us, even John and Rodney. :)

Loved this fic, in which Rodney is determined to bring his man as much pleasure as possible, despite his own discomfort.
shaddyr
Oct. 25th, 2010 11:18 pm (UTC)
Yis. I agree. We all know what a complainer Rodney is - it's one of his endearing qualities! So as much as I enjoy the fics were he gets off by just sucking John off, I don't honestly think it's true to character.

My Rodney doesn't like being on his knees, having spit dribble down, having a sore jaw, worrying about teeth, or picking pubic hairs off his tongue - but he loves John and he loves when John loses it. And for that, he will put up with the rest.

I am glad you enjoyed!
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