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FIC: Salt, Sand and Sex Wax (SGA)

Title Salt, Sand and Sex Wax
Rating NC17
Pairing or Character McKay/Sheppard
Word Count 1200+
Author Note: This is for melagan's BJF. Based on this VERY NSFW image of John and Rodney. Shut up, it totally is them. And I totally mean it about NSFW. Also, if you don't own slash goggles, you may wanna skip that one. I'm SO not kidding, so don't come whining to me if you're scarred for life.

Also, thanks to outsideth3box for beta duties. She is awesome.



Rodney watched John from the safety of a very large beach umbrella. Though sheltered from the sun's rays by the umbrella, his straw hat and a liberal coating of sunscreen, he felt himself enveloped by a slow burn. Down on the beach, John carefully applied wax to his board, seemingly oblivious to the growing mob of beach bums and bunnies he was attracting.


***

"Must you flirt with everything that moves?"

"Aw, Rodney, I'm just being friendly!"


***

Rodney was, of course, jealous. He was always jealous when John started flirting, even if it ended up saving their collectives asses out on a mission. And he was certainly flirting out there in the hot California sunshine, with the girls, the boys, the ladies, the surfers, the lifeguards – with pretty much anything sentient and moving really, because *John Sheppard* flirted as naturally as most people took a breath. He couldn't not flirt. And it was starting to drive Rodney more than a little bit batshit crazy.


***

"There is a difference, colonel, between being friendly and Kirking the natives with sultry, come-hither looks!"

"Kirking?"

"It's a word!"

***

Rodney watches John surf, riding the waves balanced on his longboard, making it all look effortless and easy. He watches John wipe-out, then bob up seconds later, laughing, to crawl back onto his board and paddle back out to do it all again.

When John finally drags himself out of the ocean, board under his arm, Rodney glares, narrow-eyed, as the surfer-groupies congregate around him. Surrounded by the sculpted, tanned hard bodies, John blends right in, clearly at home with these people who share his passion for riding a slip of fibreglass covered with wax on crashing, white swells.

The third time he observes John being fondled, he quietly blows a gasket. Rodney packs up his laptop and notebook, shoves his water bottle and sunscreen in his pack, and makes a beeline for Sheppard, intent on rescuing him from the wolves.


***

"Discussing the relative merits of Mavericks versus Half Moon Bay is not flirting, Rodney."

"Oh my god, I know you're not stupid. Do you have sun stroke? That woman was all over you, or did you not notice that when she was groping your ass?"

"Jeeze, McKay! She stumbled, I caught her, that's all that happened!"

"How is it that Atlantis has managed to not be taken over by hostile aliens when her military commander is so gullible?"

***


Once they're back in the hotel room, he barely gives John enough time to shower off the sand and salt and sex wax before he's in the stall with him, hands curled around hip and neck, lips reclaiming all that sun kissed skin that he had only grudgingly shared with the eyes of people who didn't deserve it. Rodney nips the jut of a collarbone, licks the water droplets that collect in the hollow before biting possessively at the juncture of shoulder and neck.

The two of them stumble across the room, somehow avoiding the roadblock of discarded clothing, sandals and surfing accoutrements in their path to tumble into the incredibly comfortable king sized bed. John urges him up the mattress and Rodney wiggles back, half leaning against the headboard while supporting himself on his elbows so he can watch John slowly sink down and sucks his cock all the way in.

It never fails to astonish Rodney, because not only does it feel so fucking amazing that it's all he can do not to come RIGHT THEN, but watching John Sheppard's mouth close around him, watching those lips slide over his flesh, catching John watching him while he stares, transfixed by the sight -


***

"Off, off, fuck, I want-" he shoves John's shoulder, pushing him away.

John's a little glassy-eyed, a little confused and a lot horny, making him extremely manageable. It only takes a few seconds for Rodney to get him flat on his back, spread out on the bed. John is reaching for him, pulling him in for a kiss. He gives in, and he can taste the lingering flavour of himself as he claims John's mouth, hot and dirty, tongue and teeth. John is so open and unrestrained in these moments, and Rodney gets lost in him for a bit, because kissing John Sheppard isn't something that should be done half-assedly. It needs to be done with passion, determination, and as thoroughly as possibly.

Finally he pulls away, to move down John's body, dropping kisses, nipping random bits of skin, flicking his tongue across sensitive spots, until John is quivering beneath him, hands fisting in the blanket.

"Rodney! Fuck – please... Please!"

He took John into his mouth, oh so slowly, lips sliding over his cock, enjoying the gasps and moans escaping even as John struggled to keep them back, bottom lip caught between his teeth. He bobbed up and down, getting John good and wet as he snagged the bottle of lube from near the edge of the bed where he'd placed it earlier. He popped the top and squeezed out a generous dollop, then slipped his hand around to work the slick into his ass. The prep was rough and quick – two fingers in, the burn of a little too much a little too fast – and then he pulled off, eliciting a groan of disappointment from John as his hips bucked up, trying to follow the warm, wet mouth.

And this, Rodney thinks with fierce, possessive pride, this is his, to taste and touch and hold and fuck and they can look and admire and flirt, but this belongs to him.

"John. Look at me."

John blinks, face pleasure slack, and tries to focus, tries to sit up.

"Rodney? Wha-"

Rodney pushes John gently back down. He moves up to straddle John's hips, but it isn't until he has his knees firmly bracketing John's torso, until he is sinking down on his hard cock that John fully appreciates the situation.

"Oh fuck, oh, oh!" John pants out, hips jerking up into the hot body on his. "Rodney, fuck!

Rodney leans back, wraps a hand around his own hard cock as he feels John thrust up against him and they pick up a rhythm. Rodney works himself, jerking in time with John's thrusts.

"They all want you," he blurts as they move together. "I watched them surrounding you and touching you, but you're mine!"

John's hands come down to grip Rodney's thighs, almost painfully tight. "Never wanted ... any of them," he chokes out in gasping breaths. "Just you. Only you, Rodney."

At that declaration, Rodney cries out, orgasm crashing into him like a freight train, and he paints John's chest with strips of white. He can feel John tipping over, warm pulses inside him as he struggles to catch his breath while he rides out the aftershocks. Suddenly weak, he falls forward, hands clutching at John's sides, and John's strong arms reach up, his hands coming to rest on Rodney's chest.

John gently eases Rodney off and he promptly curls over into John's side. There's a towel in easy reach on the chair by the bed and John grabs it, haphazardly mopping them both up before tossing it to the floor. Rodney mumbles under his breath about blonde beach floozies, space clap and bad boyfriend as he pulls the coverlet over them, and John seems to feel that deserves a cuff upside the head before he wraps his an arm securely around him to settle in for a nap. Rodney decides to worry about retaliating later, and follows John into sleep.

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hilde
Mar. 5th, 2011 12:04 pm (UTC)
Love the way you write John and Rodney :)Perfect companion story to the video!
shaddyr
Mar. 6th, 2011 10:10 am (UTC)
Thank you kindly!
outsideth3box
Mar. 5th, 2011 12:20 pm (UTC)
Love Rodney's way of staking his claim, very hot!
shaddyr
Mar. 6th, 2011 10:11 am (UTC)
Hee! Thanks, darlin'!
sherry57
Mar. 5th, 2011 12:41 pm (UTC)
Most often I've read jealous John which is good but this jealous Rodney is sooo good. I love how he shows John that John's his. Hot stuff!
I haven't managed to see the video...runs off to try again!
sherry57
Mar. 5th, 2011 12:45 pm (UTC)
Managed to see the gif....hot stuff and your story is so perfect for it. Thanks for sharing.
shaddyr
Mar. 6th, 2011 10:12 am (UTC)
I am glad that you enjoyed!
cjoelle
Mar. 5th, 2011 01:11 pm (UTC)
Okay, third time's a charm ?

Great story \o/, I'm glad that little gif inspired you :D.

I love John and Rodney at the beach... and afterward ;)
shaddyr
Mar. 6th, 2011 10:18 am (UTC)
*grin*

Thanks for creating the *very* inspiring gif.

John Sheppard was made for the beach... and for messing around with afterwards.
indigocat
Mar. 5th, 2011 01:16 pm (UTC)
:ove it when one of the boys is jealous.
shaddyr
Mar. 6th, 2011 10:19 am (UTC)
It's a good look on him, isn't it?

Glad you liked it!
helenkacan
Mar. 5th, 2011 02:38 pm (UTC)
"How is it that Atlantis has managed to not be taken over by hostile aliens when her military commander is so gullible?"
::giggles::
You know, I'd wondered about that myself.

This was snarky (oh, Rodney), sweet (oh, Rodney, again) and sizzling hot.
Rodney pushes John gently back down. He moves up to straddle John's hips, but it isn't until he has his knees firmly bracketing John's torso, until he is sinking down on his hard cock that John fully appreciates the situation.
Ohhhhhh, I fully appreciate the situation ... and the position from the gif. It seems strange, but I don't remember ever reading about this particular position in McShep (which seems hard to believe, right?), so it was high time it was written about and ... uh ... illustrated (complete with Rodney-belly).

::iz distracted by the hot, but pauses to thank you for putting luscious words to the image::
shaddyr
Mar. 6th, 2011 10:21 am (UTC)
Thank you for your kind feedback! I'm delighted to know you appreciate it as well. *grin* I had to watch the gif, very carefully, several times to make sure I got it right, so it's good to know that hard work benefited you!

danceswithgary
Mar. 5th, 2011 02:49 pm (UTC)
Awww, I can sympathize with Rodney - it's tough having a gorgeous/handsome significant other. :-D
shaddyr
Mar. 6th, 2011 10:22 am (UTC)
*snicker* Exactly! He has to make his claim clear, so John doesn't have any doubts.
spikespet7
Mar. 5th, 2011 02:49 pm (UTC)
I feel sorry for the beach bunny hobags, LOL...Rodney is such a wonderfully jealous boyfriend that knows just how to keep his bad naturally flirty boyfriend happy.....


Kimber
lunabee34
Mar. 5th, 2011 03:13 pm (UTC)
I agree with Rodney. Kirking is absolutely a verb!!!

*adores*
shaddyr
Mar. 6th, 2011 10:23 am (UTC)
Hee! It totally is! Everyone knows what Kirking means!

I am so pleased you enjoyed!
mckaysmonkey
Mar. 5th, 2011 03:42 pm (UTC)
"because kissing John Sheppard isn't something that should be done half-assedly. It needs to be done with passion, determination, and as thoroughly as possibly"

I totally agree ;-)

Great story and it really fits cjoelle's gif.

sgamadison
Mar. 5th, 2011 05:30 pm (UTC)
"There is a difference, colonel, between being friendly and Kirking the natives with sultry, come-hither looks!"

"Kirking?"

"It's a word!"


This bit was so perfect--so utterly them! But when Rodney claimed John as his own--I think you broke me a little. In fact, you did this so well, you've shown me what's wrong with the story I'm currently working on--thanks for this and that too!
shaddyr
Mar. 6th, 2011 10:29 am (UTC)
*meep*

Mads, when you give me feedback, you always leave me feeling humbled. I am so glad to know that I wrote something that was so true to character it helped you in some way. Thanks for letting me know - that makes my day!
lazy_8s
Mar. 5th, 2011 05:38 pm (UTC)

Freaking perfection! Loved Jealous Rodney, who took his man and staked his clain. :)
oceania
Mar. 5th, 2011 06:17 pm (UTC)
dal;fjs8fuads;ijfdk! jjI iz ded. That was the hottest thing I've read in weeks! Scorching....wow, you were truly inspired by that image!
trillingstar
Mar. 5th, 2011 06:36 pm (UTC)
Yum! I liked that Rodney stalked followed stalked John into the shower stall, that he couldn't wait.

Also, John's a little glassy-eyed, a little confused and a lot horny, making him extremely manageable. made me smile knowingly, because, yes, and, great visual.

I can't help but think that John allowed a few fondles on purpose... *g*
shaddyr
Mar. 6th, 2011 10:31 am (UTC)
I think that line was my favourite - cuz John would be a lot more malleable when he was very turned on.

Thanks for your comment!
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