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Fic: Up Till Now (SGA)

Title Up Till Now
Rating NC17
Pairing or Character McKay/Sheppard
Genre Gratuitous, post crappy mission pr0n. No reason.
Disclaimer If these boys belonged to me they would still be on the air. Though, perhaps later that they are right now...
Word Count 1400+
Author Note: This is for outsideth3box because she had a very craptastic day. It was, in fact, a day that sucked slime through a swirly straw. And she was in dire need of some cheer. And thus, John and Rodney got it goin' on. Heh. Like I really needed a reason? So anyway, this is for her.

Excerpt So, all things considered, up till this very moment, the day had been one giant cluster fuck.



Up till now, it had been the kind of a day that sucked slime through a swirly straw. Revolting, putrid sticky slime, the kind that worked its way into everything, that had to be scrubbed away until it left the skin reddened, almost raw. The kind that couldn’t be washed out of clothing, that reeked so badly everything had to be burned. Literally.

Boring mission to innocuous planet, check. Introductory diplomatic song and dance with primitive indigenous people, check. Stupid cultural misunderstand resulting in running for their lives, also check. Having the unbelievably bad luck, while evading pursuers, to encounter what was for all intents and purposes, The Bog of Eternal Stench and then *fall in*? Bonus Round of massive fail.

So, all things considered, up till this very moment, the day had been one giant cluster fuck. Until Sheppard walked in to his quarters, freshly showered, skin pink and glowing from vigorous scrubbing, and caught Rodney as he was coming out of his own bathroom, still shower damp, towel wrapped around his hips. He froze in place, the prickling sensation of a flush spreading across his chest to blend with the pink of tender skin as he watched John’s gaze travel speculatively over his body.

"Err..." He wasn’t used to having no words, but damn it. He was (actually almost literally) naked before the other man, unprepared for the open perusal and completely flustered.

"Were we... was there something... Sheppard?"

Sheppard just smiled, and it wasn’t a friendly ‘hey buddy!’ kind of smile. No, it was filled with smoky innuendo and dark promises, and Rodney felt his mouth go dry.

He wasn’t sure exactly how it happened, only that Sheppard was suddenly right there, in his space, all over him, hands on his shoulders, kissing him, and oh yeah, that was hot, smoking hot, and oh god, why hadn’t this ever happened before? The next thing he knew, he was flat on his back on the bed, towel on the floor beside Sheppard’s discarded clothing, but it’s not like he could think straight since all he could really grasp was that he was laid out, naked and wanting, and John was doing crazy things to him with his tongue and teeth, nipping at his throat and shoulders. Rodney could barely do more than murmur fractals equations that tried to describe the recursive feedback loop of pleasure building within him as he twined his fingers through John's hair, interspersed with, "Oh pleasedon'tstop," and "ohgodOHGOD!"

The wicked clever mouth was in constant motion, sparking a trail of sensation as it moved down his chest, paying careful attention to each nipple in turn and oh, OH, he hadn't even realized how sensitive he was, and jesus, since when were his nipples hot-wired to his cock? Then the hot and wet meandered across his stomach while warm hands slid under his thighs, pushing his knees up and over Sheppard's shoulders.

His whole body jerked as Sheppard dipped his tongue into Rodney's belly button before venturing lower to swirl it around the head of his cock before diving into to swallow him down. Rodney shuddered, arching up off the bed, knowing he looked debauched and desperate, but he can't bring himself to care one iota as quicksilver pleasure exploded through him, dizzying, frightening and exhilarating all at once.

John's hand trails up the outside of his thigh, over his hip, fingers lightly grazing over his ass; his thumb slipping between Rodney's ass cheeks to seek out the hidden goal, finally circling his entrance, just playing, just driving him up the fucking wall, until Rodney can't take it anymore.

"Jesus John," he gasps, terrified, but more turned on than he's ever been in his life, "stop fucking around and just *do* it already!"

John laughs, the rat bastard. It's a dark, dirty laugh that sounds like rum and sin and sex and freedom, a laugh that holds dark promise of pleasures to come.

"Where's your slick?" John asks, voice as smoky and low as the laugh, and all Rodney can do is point at the bedside table. John reaches into the drawer, rooting around for the lube, and Rodney glances over to see he's snagged the sunscreen by mistake, but when John tries to throw it back, Rodney grabs his wrist.

"I don't fucking care," he snarls, desperate at this point, "just use the sunscreen because if you don't fuck me right now, I'm going to kill you!" and John laughs again before leaning in to kiss him breathless, and all the while Rodney can feel him moving, opening the bottle and slathering up his fingers, and suddenly they slide home, just like that.

Rodney has had quite enough waiting, thank you very much, and while this may be the first time that he and John are actually acting on The Thing that has been between them since before he can remember, he does understand the basic mechanics behind it and hello, he's certainly read porn; and while John clearly loves foreplay and prep is good and important, there is only so long he can reasonably be expected to wait before he LOSES his MIND and he starts grinding down on the two slicked up fingers;

"Whoa! McKay, you've gotta take it slow-"

"Slow yes, but – nrrggh, oh god... not glacial!"

"Here, come on, it'll be good, just let me-"

"I'm letting you! Get on with it!"

- and groaning when they become three, scissoring and stretching him - "now, now, ohgodNOW, John, please-"

And then the fingers slide free to be replaced with John's cock and wow, he marvels at the slick perfection, because Holy Shit, that's a cock up his ass, JOHN'S cock up his ass, and he thinks that he might just freak out, but it's perfect, so perfect and who knew it would feel so good, and John's laughing and he realizes that, once again, he's babbling out loud – "Fine, FINE! Keep laughing – oh, fuck - because that just makes it better, oh, oh! ... don't you dare stop, you bastard –"

And then John kisses him quiet, or as quiet as McKay can ever be, because he's still panting and moaning and muttering, "ohgodyes" even as that clever tongue licks at his mouth and those teeth nibble on his bottom lip, and he loves it that he's surrounded by John, engulfed, lost and swallowed up, hazel eyes staring into his, and he never wants it to end.

He runs his hands through that crazy soft hair, devouring and being devoured in return, lost in hot, slow deep kisses that feel like an endless high, better than chocolate, better than coffee, better than science, and he'd never admit anything was better than physics but John is, he really is, because he is what makes it all make sense.

And as John's breathing becomes laboured, his thrusts erratic, Rodney *squeezes* and John stutters to a halt, gasping, shuddering - and then he's coming and Rodney can feel John's cock pulsing inside of him and it's sweet and hot and then John's got a hand wrapped around him, pulling in firm strokes and he gives it all up, spilling all over John's hand.

They collapse in a heap, sweating and sticky and panting, sated and glowing, and Rodney's thighs are starting to burn, and ow, jeeze, John's sexy as hell but fucking bony, and he weighs a tonne - "Get off, get OFF, god!" and laughing at him again. Rodney elbows him for good measure, but John keeps sniggering as he rolls to his side before pulling Rodney close against him to snuggle - who the hell would have ever suspect that Sheppard was a snuggler, for god's sake -

And as his heartbeat approaches something resembling normal and his breathing evens out, Rodney places his arm over the one that John has wrapped around his waist, and relishes the warmth of the other man spooned up against his back. Up till now, it had all been very heat of the moment, go with it and don't think, and it occurs to him, as they lay there , that he is happy. Which might normally make him freak out, but he just hasn't got the energy. Maybe tomorrow he'll freak out, but till then, he's just gonna go with it. For now.

Comments

( 27 comments — Leave a comment )
(Anonymous)
Apr. 18th, 2009 03:04 pm (UTC)
Whoa... that was great!
lazy_8s
Apr. 18th, 2009 04:17 pm (UTC)

Very hot and very much in character with our boys. Great fic!
shaddyr
Apr. 19th, 2009 08:50 am (UTC)
Thank you kindly - glad to know that you enjoyed!
onlystarchild
Apr. 18th, 2009 04:58 pm (UTC)
Yay for loud and verbal Rodney!

Up till now, it had all been very heat of the moment, go with it and don't think, and it occurs to him, as they lay there , that he is happy. Which might normally make him freak out, but he just hasn't got the energy. Maybe tomorrow he'll freak out, but he's just gonna go with it. For now. A more perfect conclusion I don't think I've read ... I love a contented and happy Rodney.

Perfect! Wonderful job here. :)
shaddyr
Apr. 19th, 2009 08:51 am (UTC)
Yis, I just can't see Rodney being quiet in bed, he'd talk and carry on and be just like his the rest of the time, and make his needs, displeasure and pleasures known.

Thanks for commenting!
danceswithgary
Apr. 18th, 2009 06:27 pm (UTC)
Great job, leaves you a little out of breath at the end - just like them. :-D
shaddyr
Apr. 19th, 2009 08:07 pm (UTC)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!
fanarts_series
Apr. 18th, 2009 07:01 pm (UTC)
it's just so perfect, totally horny and cute and hot, thanks a lot, this fic make me smile a lot.
shaddyr
Apr. 19th, 2009 08:07 pm (UTC)
I appreciate the feedback!
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shaddyr
Apr. 19th, 2009 08:10 pm (UTC)
Re: FB: Up Till Now
Hee! Happy to have reduced you fan girl hind brain to drooling and babbling. My work is done here.
outsideth3box
Apr. 18th, 2009 11:25 pm (UTC)
Oh, sweetie, this is so wonderful! Even better than it was last night - err, thisd morning, heh.

Thank you so much, gah, hot and delicious. I love Rodney, who never stops talking and John has the BEST ideas, yes!

Scorchin'!
shaddyr
Apr. 19th, 2009 08:11 pm (UTC)
Darlin', anything for you!

LOVE your icon. GUH.

Yis. Babbling Rodney is the best kind.
alsogater
Apr. 19th, 2009 02:33 am (UTC)
Excellent! Thank you for the entertainment. Best part: putting suntan lotion 'where the sun don't shine'! OMFGLOL!
shaddyr
Apr. 19th, 2009 08:13 pm (UTC)
Hee! Suntan lotion where the sun don't shine - I never thought of the implication behind that before. It was just a vehicle to convey Rodney's impatience, but thinking back - that's pretty funny, ackshuly. Hee!

Glad you enjoyed!
antares04a
Apr. 19th, 2009 06:08 am (UTC)
The perfect end for such a horrible day. *g*
And I love the way Rodney is speaking/thinking/commenting.
shaddyr
Apr. 19th, 2009 08:13 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed!
one_traveller
Apr. 19th, 2009 09:08 pm (UTC)
he'd never admit anything was better than physics but John is, he really is, because he is what makes it all make sense.

That just made me pause and sigh happily:)
one_traveller
Apr. 19th, 2009 09:22 pm (UTC)
*puts to memories*
shaddyr
Apr. 19th, 2009 09:30 pm (UTC)
Hey! I just peeked at your profile - you're in WA! There's actually a Stargate Meetup group here in Vancouver that has a couple of members from WA, even as far down as Seattle!

If you ever feel like making a day trip to Vancouver to meet some fans, check it out:

Van Stargate Group next event

Glad you enjoyed the story!
one_traveller
Apr. 19th, 2009 11:14 pm (UTC)
Oh wow, I haven't updated anything in my journal in, like, forever. I feel like I should be running around, tidying up or something:)

Thanks for the invite. I really should make it across the border more often. Last time was for VCon. Not this last VCon, mind you. The one before that. *goes to check out the link*
nuetronorange
Apr. 20th, 2009 12:29 pm (UTC)
Phew! Loved the image at the beginning Rodney in just a towel and John ogling him. Hot story, thank you.
shaddyr
Apr. 21st, 2009 05:34 pm (UTC)
Thanks! Delighted to know that you enjoyed it!
velocitygrass
Apr. 21st, 2009 06:49 pm (UTC)
Up Till Now
Hmm, hot!

My favorite bit was this:

He runs his hands through that crazy soft hair, devouring and being devoured in return, lost in hot, slow deep kisses that feel like an endless high, better than chocolate, better than coffee, better than science, and he'd never admit anything was better than physics but John is, he really is, because he is what makes it all make sense.

Because while the sex is hot, this is so much more than sex and I love how Rodney realizes/acknowledges that :)
shaddyr
Apr. 22nd, 2009 06:45 am (UTC)
Re: Up Till Now
I am so pleased that you liked this!

And yes. Rodney gets it. Even though he is a little bit high at the moment. As I have decided that there were definite, measurable aphrodisiac qualities in th stinky slimy bog. They just didn't realize until clean and skin and then, whoa.

Besides, Rodney always knew it was all about John, he just didn't grok until now.
itsjustgwen
Apr. 24th, 2009 05:19 pm (UTC)
Wow! You do the smut so well.
shaddyr
Apr. 29th, 2009 03:03 am (UTC)
Hee! I hope that means that it was enjoyable! *grin*

What can I say? John and Rodney inspire me.
gottalovev
Jul. 6th, 2009 10:39 pm (UTC)
oh yes, that was amazing. hot and desperate, just like I like my boys :)
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